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The spring awaits the fragrant roses of you cheek to bloom
Let not the charm of your spirit be dampened by the gloom

The passion to conquer the sky of knowledge isn’t destined to die
Although caged, spread your wings, for one day you will fly

The rosebud’s smile is a delusion and not a show of love
Anticipating a romantic reunion the bee has danced enough

Love may be a boundless desert of anguish and pain
Yet my obstinate heart did not, from its pursuit refrain

Your inner-self has lighted it or injury sparked the flame
Leave your heart’s furnace alight; and your agony –tame

Once it flows in the sea of past nothing will ever return
Let me harness the waves of time –this art I crave to learn

Dropped once these invaluable pearls will turn into a dust
Hold them alight on your eyelashes even if cry you must

No matter what adversities you are called upon to face
For the triumph of vice, care not Yamin, and loyalty embrace

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  1. Date: 1/21/2010 3:58:00 PM
    Good use of rhyme and imagery for a interesting view. Keep up the good writing! Karen

  1. Date: 11/7/2008 4:13:00 PM
    So so lovely, Mohammed! You can almost sing this poem, like an ancient song. You've made reading it such a pleasure! Keep up the wonderful poetry! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/22/2008 4:22:00 PM
    This is excellent, and I like the flow of each rhyming couplet. The figurative language used certainly paints a picture. I can see beautiful images especially in the second couplet. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 9/22/2008 9:09:00 AM
    Mohammad This is truly a gem! So beautifully written/Eloquent in its form. I read it twice. Your beautiful heart/soul really shines in this lovely couplet. All I can say is, may your pen never run out of ink for talent is amazing! Take care, many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 9/12/2008 11:33:00 AM
    Thanks your your comment. My book is finally out. Check it out here:

  1. Date: 9/11/2008 9:40:00 PM
    This is REALLY good. Keep up the great work!

  1. Date: 9/11/2008 8:58:00 PM
    man this is good, had to read it again and comment. Thank you for kind comments as well.

  1. Date: 9/10/2008 5:32:00 AM
    So strong and pure is your love, and so rare and wonderful is your unique style pf poetry. Another exquisite testament of your love and loyalty. Always a joy to read your work! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 9/9/2008 10:04:00 PM
    I like you and thats why the title is an honor. You are a great poet and this poem drew tears to my eyes. WARRIORS OF POETRY, its a book of charity and no one will profit from it but the publishers. Would you give this beautiful poem to charity.

  1. Date: 9/9/2008 4:37:00 PM
    Mohammad - What wonderful rhyme and flow you used to deliver this beautiful message - God Bless

  1. Date: 9/9/2008 4:22:00 PM
    This write is like a spring day with a light wind kissing the cheek and the scents of flowings in bloom - lovely. :) Blessings, Kristin...oh, and one little thing, I think you meant to put this in the couplet category, not etheree. :)

  1. Date: 9/9/2008 3:32:00 PM
    Mohammad all I can say to this is WOW? You have such a way of pulling the reader into your writes, and one feels as if they are there, you are very talented, and thanks for taking the time out to read my writes, I always look forward to your next write, because yours are filled with such passion and eloquence, take care D-nyce