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Low Tide

Low Tide Act 1: Sand I remember The hushed curve of a wave Spooling around my heart Unfurled strength Melting to the rhythm of a calming storm Passing across the damp reflection of evening sand Act 2: Moon I remember The fickle breath of foam Whispering against my back Honey-stained Paspalum Basking in slivers of bleached sun Leaping across the sails of a thousand ships Act 3: Stars I remember The depth of an ocean’s sigh Reaching refuge along the shoreline A chandelier of stars Paying homage to the distant pull of a planet Soaked in swirls of methylene blue

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Date: 12/15/2015 2:45:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Edmund. I felt a little "lost" by the Acts because I wondered where the Water Act was. Perhaps you could put one in, as you begin Act 3 with it, and then just start an Act 4 with the Stars. Different perspective, but I like your take on keeping the words concise. Keep it up.
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