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Low Complexity

Her face, Lipstick smudged on one side, Lopsided blush, Loose earring. Humming a song as she goes, Slower than it was written, Squished into one octave, Simple song, simple minded. Folding laundry on a Saturday morning, Watching the other machines and counting down the minutes, Staring at the rotation of reds and blues. Returning to an empty home, Picking up the phone, Calling her mom in the complex, Singing the song she’d rehearsed, Warm giggles, Heart to heart.

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Date: 5/3/2024 1:16:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:49:00 PM
:)...LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2014 10:27:00 PM
ERIN, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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Date: 12/20/2014 3:51:00 PM
Erin, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/18/2014 5:02:00 AM
Nicely expressed poem penned so well, congratulations on the win, Erin
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Erin Hancock
Date: 12/18/2014 4:44:00 PM
Thank you kindly
Date: 12/17/2014 1:12:00 PM
love the imagery here - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Erin Hancock
Date: 12/18/2014 4:44:00 PM
Thanks so much! Great to be able to share and learn from this community

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