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Loving You

When I first set my eyes on you Falling in love was all I could do you were like the ocean breeze that calm my desire As we sit and warm ourselves by an open fire Now loving you seem to be the best of my decisions for now were both joined as one and share a single vision to press forward day by day aiming at one sight because the way I love you makes me feel so right

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Date: 5/16/2014 10:52:00 AM
because if loving you is wrong I don't want to be right..Seems like a line from a song I once heard..Enjoyed reading your work today..Sara
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Elvernia Russell
Date: 5/16/2014 11:24:00 AM
Just the way I was feeling at that moment!

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