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Loving Softly

. Some love is just for two to know It matters not what others do it matters, just that we will know our love is simply quiet love no need for explanation no need for exclamations no shouting heard from mountains high nor violin's, or lullabies no magic verbs that can describe Without crescendos to the skies no soapbox words of declaration no lyrics, poems, to make them sigh or weary need for alibis... Devotion, one we both can feel it's us it's soft, it's real no need for other ears to hear or to witness, their own sign or clue No matter what it may appear what difference is their point of view? What matters, is ...we know it's true .......................................................................................................................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/2/2015 3:22:00 AM
That's an awesome write Carrie,, so true my friend so true,, congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/1/2015 4:14:00 PM
CARRIE, Awesome WIN.... CONGRATS luv ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/1/2015 10:24:00 AM
such a touching flowing write - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/1/2015 9:51:00 AM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :) Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Own your Beauty" if you'd like or have time. Have yourself a wonderful day. Love LINDA
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Date: 10/3/2009 7:48:00 PM
touching poem
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Date: 9/23/2009 9:20:00 AM
Touching, Carrie. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 8/26/2009 9:32:00 AM
An excellent piece that sums things up without squelchy and cliched verse. Difficult to do well - You have done it.....
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Date: 8/22/2009 12:55:00 AM
You sum love up so well Carrie.You have made this style/genre your own with your tender pen.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 8/21/2009 11:10:00 PM
another crecendo of love deep and true, as your words say the only hearts that matter are the two of you, that will show and grow a bond that all will truly see,,Blessings..Cecil, and Thank you for reading and commenting upon mywords.
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Date: 8/21/2009 12:14:00 PM
This reminds me of the song, "I only have eyes for you" soft, loving, beautiful love. You are blessed truely, Carrie, and thank you for your comments on my poem this morning also. ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/21/2009 8:08:00 AM
Very good
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Date: 8/20/2009 2:05:00 PM
Hooray for quiet love! No rap, no rock, no damn noise! Quiet, senza words is always the best. Good write. Love, daver
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Date: 8/20/2009 9:40:00 AM
What a loving write ......enjoy reading your work! alopez
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Date: 8/20/2009 5:32:00 AM
Fresh and so well written, Carrie, It is a gift to express those feelings. And thank you for your comment on Autumn Leaves. Gert
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Date: 8/20/2009 4:48:00 AM
Carrie, this is what love really is. You have written a truly amazing poem here. You are on top of the world. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2009 4:22:00 AM
This is true love ....wonderful write that sings beautifully.
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Date: 8/20/2009 2:12:00 AM
Oh, Carrie, this is the type of love that endures. Some lovers experience a rush of passion that fades in weeks or months, even years. The love you describe is that of your perfect soul mate. How lucky you are to have found this! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/19/2009 7:02:00 PM
Carrie, a very real sense of peace waves over me as I flow through this sweet write.....pretty cool to be able to transmit this to the reader! thanks! jimbo
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