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Loving Myself

There are many things I wish I could change… In the way I look In the way I feel Where’s the magic wand? Mood swings supreme Too romantic Head in a cloud Very intense PASSIONATE!!! I give all: heart, mind, soul No Way I’d change……. ME! For Contest "Love Yourself" Dana Smith July 17, 2013

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Date: 7/22/2013 5:52:00 PM
Don't ever change YOU! Those who care want you just as you are!
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Date: 7/17/2013 7:47:00 PM
Very good approach to the theme of the contest Eileen!Enjoyed.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/18/2013 1:01:00 AM
Thanks, Kash....glad you did! :)
Date: 7/17/2013 2:50:00 PM
Mood swings lol, womans excuse for changing her mind ha ha, I just spent a few minutes trying to think what you could change and the ony thing that comes to mind is, if you slowed down a little you wouldn't make so many typo's lol. Don't even contemplate changing anything my little Desert Orchid, your wonderful as you are. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/18/2013 1:03:00 AM
Hmmmmmm.....I find that men are JUST as moody, but they try to cover it better. Instead of the dramatics...they become stoic. Really....talk about change of mind and fear? Men have the corner on that one. I honestly sometimes feel sorry for you guys! Muscle and prowess but weaklings when it comes to emotional strength. Ahhhhh...glad I'm woman!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/18/2013 1:03:00 AM
If my typos are the only thing you could think of...I will forgive you, Richard. I will forgive....
Date: 7/17/2013 7:49:00 AM
Never change who you are, improve who you've already become. ;-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/18/2013 1:05:00 AM
I'm all ears......or, in this case...all eyes! ;) Please...I'm serious....Point number 1....be less emotional? Right?
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Date: 7/17/2013 10:24:00 PM
I'll do what I can! =D
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/17/2013 11:09:00 AM
Give me pointers, Drake... :-D
Date: 7/17/2013 6:54:00 AM
This is just perfect!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/17/2013 6:57:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. You honor me....
Date: 7/17/2013 5:56:00 AM
No, don't change anything about yourself because we all love you the way you are my friend! Everyone that I know here on the Soup think you are a wonderful person! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a lovely piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/17/2013 5:59:00 AM
Are you sure, Russell??? :) Intense people have a bad reputation...Sure, we're high maintenance, but.....we are intensely passionate, intensely loyal, intensely sweet. That makes us worth maintaining, right? ;) (Got that from a Friends episode). Thanks ever so much for the visit. Hugs
Date: 7/17/2013 4:01:00 AM
- You're good as you are ..... I love you! - Good luck in the contest my friend. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/18/2013 1:05:00 AM
Ps...I love you....now, where have I heard that before? ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/17/2013 5:57:00 AM
Anne Lise....hugs...Wish I could give you a big bear hug. Have a nice day, my dear.

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