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Loving Miss Grey

He spent the whole night With little Miss Grey The blander the better She preferred it that way He brought her flowers She wished they were white He wore a paisley tie She said it was too bright No lively conversation She much preferred mundane If he talked about sunshine She would talk about the rain The meal had little flavor She neglected to add salt A delicate constitution It really was not her fault She asked "please give me passion" As she looked into his eyes He placed her on the table She opened up her thighs Color flowed to her cheeks Her skin began to glow She matched his every motion Moving fast and moving slow Passion took him by surprise Pleasure hit him like a wave Releasing vibrant colors This rainbow he wished to save They retreated to her parlor Beautifully bathed in her light Transformation of Miss Grey She became his Mrs Right

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Date: 5/4/2015 1:51:00 PM
:) Just wanted to read something cute again....This fits the bill....
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Date: 1/17/2015 9:47:00 AM
Way to go, Richard. Loved reading this again... :) I bet he gave Miss Grey...lots of shades of grey! ;) Loved the sensual bit here. Love your sensual writes. You need to write more of those because you are a passionate man. :) The talk went very well...Thank God. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/17/2015 9:58:00 AM
I knew it would!
Date: 10/25/2013 11:01:00 AM
Richard ...I enjoyed reading this...ur naughty..just kidding. ..cheers to this lady !
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:07:00 AM
Loved this one! A woman is like a book, the most amazing things can be hid inside a bland cover.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2013 9:30:00 AM
That is so true.
Date: 10/21/2013 7:19:00 PM
gosh, this woman was quite the zombie herself until they made love. What the heck did he do for her? hahaha. I liked this. It's a very engaging poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2013 9:30:00 AM
Ha ha!
Date: 10/21/2013 7:18:00 PM
Zombie Land. Saw it and loved it!!! Now to see your poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2013 9:29:00 AM
My favorite zombie movie!
Date: 10/21/2013 3:56:00 PM
With all their differences Miss Grey was his Mrs Right..I loved your intriguing story which captivated me till the end.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 5:22:00 PM
In reality I was attracted to a woman and we were opposites, it did not work out well. My wife mary and I have so much in common and it has been like living a dream these last 20 years.
Date: 10/21/2013 4:02:00 AM
Love it! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Eileen for getting me to look at the last two stanzas
Date: 10/21/2013 12:35:00 AM
The "Mrs. Robinson" song kept repeating in my head during my read of this....for better or worse. =) Great vibe & word flow here.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Drake, the Graduate was a great movie and I do like that song.
Date: 10/20/2013 9:07:00 PM
From the very line and title you made me anxious to know what follows next, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram.
Date: 10/20/2013 7:14:00 PM
such a witty write Richard...love that miss gray became colorful in the end...enjoyed the journey through your words...great poem :) hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Sandra.
Date: 10/20/2013 5:05:00 PM
Miss Grey sure knew her stuff, hey? I loved this entertaining piece, Richard. Well done, my friend. Licia ;-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Licia, glad to entertain!
Date: 10/20/2013 12:34:00 PM
Little Miss Grey became Miss Rainbow....and why not? With that kind of pleasure...Lovely....Please check your mail, Richard...Thanks!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2013 1:05:00 PM
Forgot this................... :)
Date: 10/20/2013 11:29:00 AM
Haha..I was wondering where that was going.....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 8:21:00 AM
All the way apparently!
Date: 10/20/2013 11:07:00 AM
Yes, never judge a book by its cover Rick, the story inside might be just the best you've ever read. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 8:22:00 AM
You got that right Richard.;0)
Date: 10/20/2013 10:54:00 AM
fantastic Richard a wealth of emotions you travel through to a shattering climax great pen Shadow x smile hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 8:23:00 AM
I like your choice of words *lol*
Date: 10/20/2013 10:04:00 AM
most excellent indeed, aside from the obvious creativity, the poem took me thru many different feelings in so short a span of time. Went from a little goofy and oddball, to embarrassed, to giggly leading into surprise and finally heart warming. Love it!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2013 8:24:00 AM
I love this comment, if I could I would fav it.

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