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Loving In the Wind

We dreamed, we sang, we danced, we wished, we laughed We risked it all We loved our best We couldn't trust the wind It's flow was unpredictable Our love compass couldn't work with it The wind was like containing a smoke that would eventually escape So we dreamed, we sang, we danced, we wished, we laughed We played in the wind We loved catching those dried leaves blowing our way We competed to see who would catch more Of those dried leaves Of those perished heart throbs Thou dry, they were also beautiful in a different way Scared of how our love would end, we held tight And dreamed, and sang, and danced, and wished and laughed Till the end Sponsor SKAT A Contest Name WIND

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Date: 8/30/2015 5:32:00 AM
This is really lovely, the reader sees and feels all of it :) makes one think of past times.... Thanks for visiting mine, it was great to find your writings!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/31/2015 4:40:00 AM
Thank you Greta. It was great to find your writings too:-)
Date: 8/27/2015 1:10:00 AM
Lovely write, njeri. Keep on laughing and dancing. Good luck in the contest, Viv x
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/27/2015 1:42:00 AM
Thank you Viv for the good luck and the visit. Have a good day:-)

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