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Loves Wonder

Aye but my love for you full of wonder Sighting your face, my heart full of thunder Your skin feels like mine, more tender and thin Your eyes my surprise, love journey begins My mind deceives, what my senses behold Each time I touch you, a story unfolds Lightning strikes, expectations unforeseen For you in the flesh outstripping my dreams Strange it would seem, I see only your smile As the words from your lips, journey a while Mesmerized beauty, is all I can see Anesthetized wonder, blinds like the bee Joy in your presence confounding my style Love it keeps pounding my heart like a child

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/31/2010 2:46:00 PM

a great poem.so much wonder in love thats true, i like how you use a child's in with it. -always&forever lynette

Cecil Hickman

Date: 5/31/2010 12:17:00 AM

yes the wonder of it still sends receivers of it in circles and more,,,Great Italion Sonnet,,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..cecil

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/24/2010 7:05:00 PM

Are we so in luv David dear? this is so lovely and u seem captured in every line.. awesome as always... my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/23/2010 2:29:00 PM

Beautiful write and original in its expression. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/23/2010 6:31:00 AM

Feeling the excitement and wonder as beauty casts its spell is one of the most pleasurable experiences we can have, David. Such beautiful thoughts on falling hard for someone who keeps your heart "pounding." Wonderul poem, David. Thanks for sharing. Love, Carolyn