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Loves Perception

my eyes are closed, now i perceive her so blindness i crave, rather losing her sight naive my thoughts blunder, truly conscious of her, fool i prefer to stay, if wisdom cost her my feelings meet no bounds, but in her they all subdue, love restless so be, to be content only within her my actions make no sense in her happiness i am comfortable clown i prefer to be label than see her eyes in tear my words fail to capture, her tender beautiful feature, i rather wait as a mute spectator as beauty beg to be define by her my time live frozen, warmth in her as i cuddle, i prefer to die here, rather from her arms far death will play foul, but our soul in timeless mould, as union of true lovers be crowned poems of our passion be written down ...rAHUL

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Date: 9/9/2010 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations Rahul on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2010 1:27:00 PM
Congrats Rahul on your big win in Tavarus's contest .. Is She the One... an amazing poem..so enjoy your sweet victory today.. have a safe and happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 9/1/2009 2:25:00 PM
Nicely intense emotions and romantic! Congratulations on your honourable mention in Trudy's contest!
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Date: 9/1/2009 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on this tender love poem, and placing in Trudy's contest, Rahul !! Well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/1/2009 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations Rahul on your win in Trudy's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2009 11:33:00 PM
Rahul, congratulations on your success in Trudy's contest...Raul
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Date: 8/31/2009 10:10:00 PM
Rahul, congratulations on placing in my first contest! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/18/2009 12:26:00 PM
and may many more of your poems be written down for all to read... -Alley
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Date: 7/3/2009 6:03:00 AM
Soup mail..
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Date: 6/19/2009 3:56:00 PM
Beautiful love flowing through these words...the last line is terrific..well done.
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