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Love's Patience

Love is like a brain, like a mind of constant pain. An overwhelming happiness, enveloped with fears and strain. A pulse inside your temple, that never stops upon the start. It's the beating one endures, like the beating of your heart. It's lying on your pillow, alone, cradling, in the night. Dreams filled with many colors, yet waking to black and white. It's repeating mundane tasks, forcing distraction from the tide. Grasping for ways to pass the time, from longing to be by their side. But more than the rest it's patience. A virtue I'll never understand. What good can come from waiting here... without your palm pressed in my hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/3/2010 12:44:00 PM
Really lovely Amy.. loved the last stanza...Allie
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:43:00 AM
From the poetry I have been reading today I can see the weekend handed out a lot of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and wish you continued inspiration thank you for sharing Amy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 5:28:00 PM
Beautiful romantic write. I enjoyed every word.
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Date: 5/2/2010 11:33:00 AM
Great romantic write that you have penned today..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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