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Love's Innocence

Love’s Innocence If eyes could only look one time on love’s clear continence By humble brook of babbles waters By moss covered morning rocks To watch you seated on the moist surface And pass your hand across the moving water’s grain To see you and all your purity designed by God And as for me with my precious luck Enough to pass this spot by chance To witness such beauty to exist like this And with all of nature to explore the glory of such innocence A moment captured in eternal bliss Love’s mystery Created on 5/11/15 for “When Love Was Innocent”- Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Justin Bordner

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Date: 5/28/2015 5:57:00 AM
Oh, this is unique and lovely...A 7 . Congratulations on your win, Earl! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading.
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Date: 5/28/2015 9:57:00 AM
Hi Kim. Thank you so much. You are not bad. I am bad. I have been too lazy and preoccupied these days with trivial matters and have neglected the really important things in life. Poetry is a very important matter. I really enjoyed your creation for this contest. Congratulations on your win and very sweet poem. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl
Date: 5/19/2015 4:56:00 PM
Congratulations Earl..'
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Date: 5/20/2015 10:15:00 AM
Hi Joe, Thank you so much for commenting. I hope you enjoyed my creation. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 5/19/2015 9:29:00 AM
EARL:) Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. That was nice of Justin------ Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 5/11/2015 10:11:00 AM
Breathtaking scene you ve created with your words Earl... loved it .. wish u best for the contest... nadiya
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Date: 5/11/2015 10:51:00 AM
Hi Nadiya, Thank you so much for your kind words and appreciation of my creation. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl

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