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Love's Exposition

wherein lies beauty held captive by eyes forlorn heart thirsts ... reflective breach misty wall of silence unveils passion desiring joyous warmth of love disperse ~*~ 10/28/12 For Su's Tanka Contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 11/3/2012 6:47:00 AM

A lovely Tanka here by you Annalise!Enjoyed the read.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2012 3:00:00 PM

how lovely to find this one of yours today. I enjoy tankas and this is a great message!

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/31/2012 8:15:00 AM

‡ Oh And I Love Depth In Heart I Find; Sooo Beautiful. Have A Glorious Day, Sweet Beautiful Annalise. Kisses To You, Rachel *

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/31/2012 1:15:00 PM

I'm wishing you the same, dear and take care of yourself, hear? Love ya!

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/31/2012 8:09:00 AM

‡ I May As Well Let Your Beauty Know Now That This Storm Brewing Beauty, Is Marked In The Most Treasured Of Beautiful Favourites, Sweet Beautiful Annalise. Intense These Flames In Red Passion Twined This Love; Completely Captivating. Happy Holloween To You And Thank You For Your Beauty's Kind Visit. My Love, Rachel *

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/31/2012 1:13:00 PM

: ) Always good to know that you're around, Rachel...Thanks for the glowing comment. Bless you for your kind support and love always.. xxoo to you!