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Love's Elegy

Dark nights shrouded a woeful face Everywhere is obscure Succumb the life in oblivion Kneel on the floor and mourn Footsteps of the memory linger Dirge played in solitude Weeping out loud in isolation Shed tears of countless drops Misty-eyed was wounded on the soul Words of comfort vanished Lies are thousand miles away from truth Confusing state laments Loneliness is a silent killer Wild world in commotion

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Date: 3/25/2010 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations Cecilia, On this worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/23/2010 2:09:00 PM
Whoa seriously congrats on this poem it's just awesome. I hope to read more of your poems. --- Nemo
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Date: 3/23/2010 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations Cecilia, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cecilia. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2010 12:12:00 PM
Your poem that is being featured does not take the form of a sonnet. The only thing in common with a sonnet is the fourteen verses. This critique is meant to enhance your knowledge about sonnet form, not to criticize your poetic abilities.
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Date: 3/21/2010 12:06:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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