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Loves Departure

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Loves Departure

I stand and watch as you depart,
And as you turn your head and glance,
The moment stills my heart...
When will we have another chance?

Your perfume lingers in the air
And tempts me yet to call aloud.
We should be careful not to stare,
Our love contained beneath a shroud.

Until we dare next share a kiss,
I'll hold this moment in my heart.
And with each breath I take I'll miss
You, as I do now you depart.

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:39:00 AM
    I love this one. Mine was long but I just love them short and sweet like this one. Congratulations, Ray.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Ray xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:55:00 PM
    Ray, congratulations in the Skat, contest. Take Care PD

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:27:00 PM
    Congratulations ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:57:00 AM
    well written.....liked it........

    Dillard Avatar Ray Dillard
    Date: 12/13/2012 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by to read my poetic musings. It pleases me to know that someone takes an interest. RAY
  1. Date: 4/27/2010 8:57:00 PM
    Nicely done Ray. Good luck in the contest (assuming here).

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 8:44:00 PM
    A well penned poem with fine rhyming