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Loves Deadly Spell

Together they live happily forever in a life filled with sorrows and sadness they will be together, always never excluded from reality for life Forever or never they live to cry, away they will be gone with but a knife the choice to live happily or to just die A knife or life, forever or never a quarrel, a death, leaving one alone he lies on the ground, a knife in his heart a plan, a scheme, its never to be known She says to herself "we must never part" Now two dead hearts lie, killed with the same knife Why? Was it love or just a wast of life?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/30/2012 11:25:00 PM
Whatever age its a great sonnet. Welll done. Seren
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Deeana Valencia
Date: 10/31/2012 12:50:00 AM
Thank you, I appreciate the comment.
Date: 10/30/2012 11:18:00 PM
This was the first poem I ever wrote. When I was 14 yrs old, I was given an assignment to write a sonnet. 16 years later I still love poetry.
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