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Love's Breath Taken

To have your eyes slide over my body Fills me with a trembling rapture A need so great as to be a sweet slow spreading pain Your touch turns me to searing desire Comsuming all thought but that of our lovemaking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/29/2013 8:58:00 PM
This is very romantic and full of passion. Lots of emotion and feeling. Very intensely passionate nice job
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Date: 5/9/2010 5:25:00 AM
I love the sensual quality in this poem, Paula. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/9/2010 2:23:00 AM
A very passionate poem. A trembling rapture - nice image
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