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Loves Brake

LOVE’S BRAKE Many are by the night mice, They eat you quietly like lice Their pretence is just to entice ... They are by no means really nice The farmer’s love for his hens: Every time in and out the pens; So often he bakes with their eggs His pet feeds daily on their legs. Hold the brake when you hear love, He may sing songs, she may with you laugh; The agenda for you can be rough and tough: Though it looks a sheep,it can still be a wolf. Calamity hides its dagger under tongue and face; So many have become its preys without any trace. User's name : Kayod5 Contest : Impress me with small poem 11 Motiff : Philosophic Sponsor : Giorgio V.

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Date: 3/8/2014 5:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win Kayode, liked how you wrote this. Nice!
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Date: 3/7/2014 1:41:00 PM
Very good advice, Kayode. Everyone should think twice before falling in love. Even though it's difficult to remember that in the moment! Congratulations on your win, as well! :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 1:21:00 AM
Impressive. Congrats on the win!!
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Date: 3/6/2014 8:58:00 PM
hey, I am seeing this one again on the winner's list this time. BIG congrats, my friend.
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Date: 3/6/2014 8:10:00 AM
I'm impressed as well, congratulations.
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Date: 3/5/2014 12:53:00 PM
Superb bro!! Congrats on the win!!! Very philosophical!!!
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Date: 3/5/2014 8:28:00 AM
Super . It is proved that now love is madness , selfishness ...Truly I am speechless dear ...Best wishes from India ..
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Date: 3/5/2014 7:08:00 AM
- Hello Kayod5, congratulations on your lovely winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2014 5:33:00 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, kayod5
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Date: 2/8/2014 8:02:00 PM
ok, I read what you said to me down here and now I get it. I did not know Val meant Valentines!! It's also short for the name Valarie! You could call it Love's brake too!
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Date: 2/8/2014 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for your time and suggestion; may the lord reward you in folds.
Date: 2/8/2014 10:17:00 AM
Kayod5 good pen hugs
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Date: 2/8/2014 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Shadow, if Shadow said good then it must be good.
Date: 2/7/2014 9:37:00 PM
Yes, I really get this one. it is full of wisdom. Why do you call it Val's brake?
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/8/2014 12:39:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I call it Val's brake because it is meant to caution people that may be carried away with the idea of valentines to love with moderation; just like a reckless driver on highway needs his brake for the avoidance of accident. Any better idea Andrea? I will be glad to learn from you again.
Date: 2/7/2014 1:54:00 PM
I like the play on good and evil so to speak..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments inspire me..Sara
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/7/2014 2:04:00 PM
Thank you Sara,have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 2/7/2014 10:36:00 AM
very insightful read making this page jump with your edgy, delightful images, kayods... fine stufff!.. huggs
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/7/2014 10:50:00 AM
Thank very much nette, have a wonderful weekend and may the Lord of hosts protect you and all that is yours from recent ocean upsurge in Philippines.
Date: 2/7/2014 8:25:00 AM
This is simply a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a terrific piece, such a tremendous poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:54:00 AM
Thank you for your reading and comment good Russell.Have lovely weekend.

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