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Loves Amputees

Dismiss me so gently like swishing chiffon To dream like a phoenix, time to drone on But dead like a doormat,unable to pain Pillar of salt , summoned by the urgent sea There to be drowned but for the buoyancy Pavemented path of ceaseless regret Appartion goes past I try to forget Oh that was us, why is this what we do? We smash our beliefs so deliberately Hopes doleful travellers, loves amputees Tore out the page yet swore to be true Promises made with a foot in the door Eavesdrop a thought ,oh God I miss you

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Date: 12/26/2017 7:23:00 AM
Beautiful poem of introspective reflection, Jannie. Your thoughts pierces the heart w/poetic arrows of poignancy. Beautiful poet you keep speaking from your quiet place of rustic solitude. Another mother brother's love to you. Love and joy forever.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 12/26/2017 11:40:00 AM
Ty Freddie. As.always
Date: 10/18/2017 10:37:00 AM
The words help but can never alleviate the pain.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 10/19/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thanks for calling in James. Youre right off course
Date: 10/6/2017 6:59:00 AM
Jannie I wish I could take your pain away. Bring you boxes of happiness. You have touched my heart deeply with your poem. Love finds you when you least expect it too.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 10/7/2017 12:42:00 AM
Indeed you have, I have moved on and everything is milk and cookies again. At the time though, it was excruciating. We eventually dwell on another plane
Date: 10/5/2017 6:47:00 AM
A deep write that touches the heart..
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 10/5/2017 6:59:00 AM
Oh S.O. thank you for looking in again. Welcome and thank you

Book: Shattered Sighs