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Love's All I Need

Love’s All I Need! Winter snows melt away Awakens sleeping things Mother nature starts to play And I too with my swing Cause golf comes out in Spring! Amid ablooming flowers At Master’s, golf’s big scene Did golf for several hours Living out my dreams To play Augusta’s greens! Three stroke lead on seventeen Victory now was nigh When did my chip careen Into water ‘twas nearby Off a Monarch butterfly! Short putt to win the match All grew quiet, not a word But victory, it was snatched As startled when I heard Loud screeching from a bird! Golf’s such a cruel cruel game I've given up thereof At tennis taking aim Won’t need no blasted club And tennis least has love! © 2014 all rights reserved written May 10,2014 for A Spring Day in English Quintain Free Poetry Contest using words Spring, green, butterfly, bird and love

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Date: 6/8/2014 7:51:00 AM
Andy, , Congratulations, on the win, amazing Spring Imagery. <3 SKAT
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Andy Richards
Date: 6/8/2014 6:02:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 6/1/2014 9:29:00 AM
Ahhh!! A little among the springtime's flowers...Congrats on your win..Sara
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Andy Richards
Date: 6/8/2014 7:45:00 AM
I thought something was missing! :) Thank you!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/1/2014 9:30:00 AM
It should say a little game among...Sara
Date: 5/31/2014 1:32:00 PM
wow, Andy, this is one of the most create ones on the winners' list. It is a very interesting one for me because it is NOT just about spring. Congrats. I really like this one.
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Andy Richards
Date: 5/31/2014 2:43:00 PM
The words aligned :) and Spring means golf and tennis!
Date: 5/31/2014 2:10:00 AM
Lovely poem on the Spring. Congrats on the win, andy
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Andy Richards
Date: 5/31/2014 5:21:00 AM
much obliged...
Date: 5/31/2014 12:13:00 AM
unique take on the contest Andy, congrats on your placement
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Andy Richards
Date: 5/31/2014 5:21:00 AM
thank you..
Date: 5/30/2014 4:48:00 PM
Andy, I just love humor and this was quite a witty take on spring. Enjoyed the way you worked all of the golf jargon into your quintain. The last line is a hoot! Congratulations! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Andy Richards
Date: 5/30/2014 7:50:00 PM
thank you so much!
Date: 5/22/2014 2:24:00 PM
Great rhyme and a smooth word flow. This is a very clever write, Andy. I enjoyed it! Good luck in the contest!
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Andy Richards
Date: 5/22/2014 4:20:00 PM
I appreciate your kind words!
Date: 5/19/2014 10:08:00 AM
Great poem thanks for sharing Maddie
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Date: 5/18/2014 4:16:00 PM
P.S. I think the contest sponsor is Francine Roberts. If that's correct, she's recuperating from a traffic accident. She's one of the "Birthday" gals I want to cheer up with my contest.
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Andy Richards
Date: 5/18/2014 5:10:00 PM
thanks for the scoop!
Date: 5/18/2014 4:14:00 PM
My, you are so witty! Laughed out loud when I got to the last line. Excellent English Quintain and perfect rhyme. (I'll take fishing any day. Just wish I could find a lover named "Rod.") Carolyn
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Andy Richards
Date: 5/18/2014 5:10:00 PM
HURH! (Happy UR Happy) UR witty too! thanks..
Date: 5/14/2014 11:07:00 PM
Andy, you did well for this contest. Is it out yet. I like the Monarch butterfly! thanks for sharing the beauty in every line... Linda
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Andy Richards
Date: 5/18/2014 5:11:00 PM
not sure about the contest and such... Monarchs are the best!
Date: 5/12/2014 11:34:00 AM
Oh very enjoyable!! Sweet wit and skill you write with, I look forward to seeing what else you have in store for us Andy :) write on!
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Andy Richards
Date: 5/12/2014 12:15:00 PM
Thank you for the encouragement! Write on I shall :)
Date: 5/12/2014 7:18:00 AM
Love it - very witty - nicely done!
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Andy Richards
Date: 5/12/2014 12:13:00 PM
Thank you!

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