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Lover's Quest-Collaboration With Darren White:

I’ll think of a place that’s far away, In my mind, I shall escape, In colours and shapes with nothing to say, From a land that has no fate. Swirling images that make no sense, Happy to fly amongst the scenes, In a world you may say is full of nonsense, This quiet world knows no screams. With only shapes, free forms of light, In many different colours. They swirl and whirl, in patterns bright, Infinitely turning smaller. 'Till they all fit inside your brain, A world inverted yet vast, Where peace lives, free from pain, Where future's also past. But between the two we shall both meet, As though it were our quest in life, I the stem, you the flower so sweet, Neither shall be seen by the knife. We’ll hold each other until the end, For that is the way that lovers do, In my heart my love I do send, And shall always be in love with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/24/2017 5:02:00 PM
Magnificent collab, fellas. Seamless poetry, both of your voices blended as one, WW and Darren. Love the ending of course, it mellows my Romantic Warrior's heart. Love and joy to you both.
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White Wolf
Date: 1/24/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you very much, RW /|\
Date: 1/20/2017 10:16:00 AM
I love the imagery of the flower and the line..A world inverted yet vast Where peace lives, free from pain..terrific collab
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Darren White
Date: 2/1/2017 12:25:00 AM
Yeah, I did too, thank you :)
Date: 1/20/2017 7:17:00 AM
I just left this comment on Darren's page and thought it only fair I should leave it here as well. Another beautiful poetic duet from two amazing poets. Bravo rick and Darren
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Date: 1/20/2017 5:26:00 AM
Keep collaborating for we richer become! A seven to each of you dear friends!
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios :)
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White Wolf
Date: 1/20/2017 5:37:00 AM
Thank you O wise one /|\
Date: 1/20/2017 5:11:00 AM
Nice collaboration 'quest' ...
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White Wolf
Date: 1/20/2017 5:17:00 AM
Thank you, Probir /|\
Date: 1/20/2017 2:33:00 AM
Love this one! Such a pleasure to work with you Budgie :)
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 2:45:00 AM
Nope, you underestimate yourself greatly, my friend! I love your poetry
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White Wolf
Date: 1/20/2017 2:35:00 AM
Haha, you're the talent, I just go along for the ride! /|\

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