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Lover's Dream - a Sonnet

Watching the night sky and thinking of you, Hoping for dawn, why won't you let me be? Breathing the morning air, hopes now anew, I am waiting for you to come set me free. I cannot see stars but I can still love, It's now dark because I've lost you from sight. A sigh leaves my mouth, I see you above, And you end the dark with new burning light. The sunrise paints clouds with a happy gold, And now you are here, I know love is real. My prince has arrived, so valiant and bold, Now we know none will ever my heart steal. And never again will I for you miss, For my dreams are sealed with one loving kiss.

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Date: 3/20/2013 5:32:00 AM
A very decent sonnet, despite some minor, awkward phrasing in a couple of places! Still, your sonnet is praiseworthy. Thanks! Ngoc.
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Elaine Ho
Date: 7/29/2015 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Ngoc for your feedback, always appreciated coming from you!

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