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Lovers Day

The day has come Can we take this time to begin again? All the old is no longer What ever that might be because I see and feel the love I first felt. The glitter in your eyes and the butterflies in my stomach Has returned because you made this day about me and me about you. Let's rekindle the love we once felt for each other because Its Valentine's day. But let's not stop there. Can it be Valentine's day everyday? Making our love first in our lives. Holding hands to make it through the daily struggles of life? With eternal love To all the lovers out there and those looking for real love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/13/2014 8:16:00 PM
"regendal"? No such word exists in the English language. What I believe you want is "rekindle", which means to restart or revive something. Also, you can separate the verbal siamese twin "feltfor" which is on the same line. Make these two changes, and you have something that appears viable.
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