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Lover's Call

Lover's Call I'm dizzy I'm spinning I'm practically falling to the ground I can't see a thing or even hear a sound I'm in a fix just hit me now with a dozen sticks Just get me out I wanna scream and shout How much I love you I love you I love you I love you so much!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/9/2009 8:58:00 AM
Great poem girl!! I love it! :)
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Date: 1/6/2009 9:38:00 AM
This is wonderful, Maryam! It does feel like that, sometimes, and a whole lot more. Great write and emotional expression! Thank you for your thoughtful comment. (I think this would be considered "Free Verse") Love, Robin
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