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Lovers' Call

Lovers' Call I, am made of glass you are exquisite marble come, please shatter me

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/11/2012 7:10:00 AM

Congrats Robin on this "sharp" senryu being featured. Vince

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/11/2012 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations on having this work featured. Good senryu.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/10/2012 6:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved feature Robin. Love, Carol

Joseph Burchett

Date: 2/8/2012 9:57:00 AM

Very true in life.

Daver Austin

Date: 2/8/2012 8:50:00 AM

You want her to fall off her perch - Freudian. I like this poem mucho. Congrats on the selection. daver

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/6/2012 11:26:00 PM

Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup this week.................S.Ronthorpe

James Fraser

Date: 9/19/2009 1:38:00 PM

Super Senyru Robin>>James

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/15/2009 5:24:00 AM

Beautiful write. Love exquisite marble and shatter me....sounds very explosive.

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/11/2008 2:00:00 AM

You're knocking out the Senryu's too, I don't think there is a style you are not good at. I love them all...Raul

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/29/2008 3:56:00 PM

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!! This IS exquisite!! ^.^ Love Alexz

Samantha Watts

Date: 11/29/2008 12:13:00 PM

This so amazing! its short but it has such a deep meaning and it has instently became one of my favorite poems :). This is very nice, Robin. ~Sammy~

James Foulk

Date: 11/26/2008 5:54:00 PM

what an idea for a poem, very clever. thank you for reading my kinfolk and for your comment and have a happy thanksgiving.

Date: 11/26/2008 5:32:00 PM

So much said in just three lines. Interesting imagery carries your thoughts. I left a comment for you and others on my poem, "Dancing". I appreciate your encouragement. Keep on writing! Happy Thanksgiving! Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/26/2008 5:23:00 AM

Wow. Awesome Senryu. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/26/2008 3:57:00 AM

An emotional write. This would do better under the Senryu category, however. :) I love that first line. love, Kristin

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/26/2008 3:26:00 AM

Lovely Haiku. Poetic and passionate. Love, Nigel