Lovers

He: this is not fair This is something i can't bear What's the wrong with me being poor and you being rich If we will share the same salt pinch! She: i can't believe this either! We must fulfill our love I'm Rome and you're my caesar This can't be put off He: here is not the place we belong We should be in heaven There our love can be so strong And we would be there even She: we shall die together To rest from all the suspicious eyes Here are two poisoned drinks So we can meet in paradise He: finally we will live happily With no more disguise I really like your idea It's so insightful and wise She: i wanted us to live together But i can not see you dying So i didn't put poison in your cup I just put in mine! He: i knew you would do such thing Because you really worth trust You know i love you very much That's why i have switched the c......!

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/24/2017 7:46:00 AM

Such a beautiful written poem, it truly touch my heart, well people told me that poetry is all about been clear about your feelings, emotions and imaginations and I can t see a better way in which you can describe them more clearly, really beautiful write, I could see the love both of them have for each other, may God bless you

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/13/2015 1:57:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Mohamed!

Skat A

Date: 8/13/2015 1:45:00 AM

sweet win... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2015 7:53:00 PM

Mohamed, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/23/2014 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Mohamed

Mohamed Adel
Date: 9/24/2014 7:04:00 AM

thank you Brenda so much :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2014 6:36:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Mohamed

Mohamed Adel
Date: 9/24/2014 7:04:00 AM

thank you Dr.Ram very much :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2014 9:33:00 PM

Mohamed, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Mohamed Adel
Date: 9/24/2014 7:06:00 AM

thank you LINDA so much, and of course i will :)

Skat A

Date: 8/27/2014 8:01:00 PM

MOHAMED, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/28/2014 8:14:00 PM

Hello SKAT :) thank you very much for reading the poem and also commenting, the honor would be mine to be a friend of yours :) , i hope to know more of you and of the other poets here over time and all of us become friends :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2014 7:59:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mohamed - I choose your first moving/sad written poem - Well done - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/24/2014 7:11:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise so much :) and I'm so glad to be part of poetrysoup and its wonderful poets :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/23/2014 11:53:00 PM

This is such a deep powerful inspirational write! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/24/2014 2:14:00 AM

Thank you Pandita very much, I'm really happy you liked it :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/22/2014 7:33:00 PM

that is such a sad tale, well said, you drawn me in a kept me hooked. Well done! Welcome to poetrysoup.

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/22/2014 7:58:00 PM

Thank you Casarah so much, I'm really glad you liked it :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/22/2014 2:10:00 PM

Mohamed,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/22/2014 6:58:00 PM

Thank you Linda very much :) i hope you enjoyed my humble poem :) i can't wait to read some of yours and which contest do you mean? because i found many