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Lovers

.                              diary of river banks
                                    lovers lay on sand blankets
                                                         ....August moon blushes

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  1. Date: 9/23/2009 2:39:00 PM
    Aaaah... Young and In Love, with Only A Care to Dare .... Sensual Sight for The River Banks, eh? Very Nice Write, Abe... MoonBee

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 8:43:00 AM
    Thank's for you commenting my poem So far, Abe! If you#d like you could see some of my pictures on facebook. Gert

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 8:39:00 AM
    Mail delivery!

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 1:04:00 AM
    Left you some mail

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 12:29:00 PM
    love the romance man i love to be on the riverbanks..........FISHIN!

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 10:27:00 AM
    You have a way with words, this is pure fire!!!

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 9:05:00 AM
    oh nice. what is better than lovemaking under the August moon?

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 8:30:00 AM
    Oooooooo la la.....that pink-faced man in the moon better divert his eyes.......Any river banks close by in Gracemont?? :)

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 7:39:00 AM
    Nice, my imagination is flying... : ) Great senryu, Abe. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 7:18:00 AM
    I do like your line "Diary of river banks".... Well written Senryu, Abe! Thank you for commenting "Out of the Blue" and pls. comment also on my poem "So far". Gert

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 6:35:00 AM
    Poised beautifully. Pls comment my poem SleepAloof..thankfully.

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 6:33:00 AM
    i can picture this moment Abe,two lovers on sand blankets,diary of river banks,and i love the last verse ,making the August moon blush..miust have been naughty:)--to my favs,many beautiful writes today,many inspired--excellent--CHARMA