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The sea is a wild feast - my heart in breast beating. The sea, a hungry beast, tug of war competing. My feet dissolve in its wake. I wade out to meet the waves. Ebb and flow of friendship. Salty air above my waist. The wind sloshes my lips. My cheeks, a blush sunbake. I dive into the sublime sea. Turquoise eyes of treachery allow my vivacity and glee; kindness swashed with brevity. Breathless - make no mistake, I listen to mermaids’ environs, avoid pitfalls’ overconfidence, cover ears, stave off sirens, not greedy for DL opulence.* Finless and feckless mistake, if I find myself too far from shore, arms and foam in dosido, afraid and pleasured by the roar - in fearful pretense, I’m paddling slow. For the dorsal fin of ship, I ache. Calypso music distracts on deck. I leave my lover far below unchecked. Climbing like a pirate to wreck the captain’s safety, the sea at my neck. Drowned in seaweed silk; bound and awake. 8/30/2021 *DL - Davy’s Locker

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Date: 9/5/2021 7:46:00 AM
this is truly one of your best Kim Wonderful and powerful poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2021 10:19:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 9/2/2021 10:47:00 AM
So beautiful rhyme Kim.. "my feet dissolves in its wake.. "... loved it... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2021 3:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anitha!
Date: 9/2/2021 5:57:00 AM
Wow. Powerful poem. . Well written. I hope all is well :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2021 2:31:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 9/2/2021 1:57:00 AM
A beautiful rhyme, Kim, loved reading it:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2021 3:08:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Jo!
Date: 9/1/2021 3:04:00 PM
Beautiful Kim. However there are things in the ocean that are big enough to consider us part of the food chain. I stay close to shore. Lovely write and the pic is lovely. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2021 7:53:00 PM
LOL! That is true enough. Went snorkeling in Cozumel. We were told not to go near “the blur of blue” (open ocean and who knows what is over there! ;)
Date: 9/1/2021 11:44:00 AM
This is amazing. I love love love it! I'm not as much of a sea lover as I am a river lover... but love your poem so. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2021 7:52:00 PM
That’s fun! A particular river…local or major?
Date: 9/1/2021 2:21:00 AM
No doubt about it...you are a sea lover, Kim :) A delightful poem, and the rhyme scheme is worthy of mention. I love swimming in the sea, especially now that the water is at 28C. ~ Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2021 7:51:00 PM
Love the sea…miss the cruises!
Date: 9/1/2021 1:21:00 AM
Used to love the sea. In Malta we have a proverb: The belly of the is soft, but it is hard headed. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2021 7:51:00 PM
Thanks for sharing the saying! Never heard that one.
Date: 8/31/2021 12:05:00 PM
I too love the sea but you're right in can turn into a ferocious beast. Well written Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2021 12:21:00 PM
Don’t turn your back on it! Thank you, Tom!

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