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Lovely In Pink

A newborn’s toes wiggle like candy pink Curled by rose petals, more fresh than morn’s scent Flinging those buds, I trace her blossoms. Pastel from the wink of sunlight’s blossoms She chuckles as tiny feet gush in pink, While the hammock billows a fruity scent. In quick of naps,ten toes waft talcum scent Till chuckles burst forth from jiggling blossoms, My grandchild, my rose; graced by daytime's pink. Lovely pink charmer wakes scent of blossoms! For Kelly Deschler's Simply Beautiful #2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/28/2015 12:51:00 PM
Good to be back re-reading this cute and lovely poem, Nette! Congrats on another merited win. // Still not back on Soup, but stopping by a while to visit friends:) hugs // paul
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Date: 4/26/2015 12:06:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your Simply Beautiful # 2 contest win :) Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:04:00 AM
This poem is a beauty. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/20/2015 12:48:00 PM
Very sweet, Nette, and so nicely written. Brings back memories to me of those days with grand babies! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:49:00 PM
I remember this one, Nette; a beautiful poem for your little pink love. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:32:00 PM
This charming poem is so precious... Very nicely written, Nette! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:01:00 PM
I remember reading this before Nette - many congrats on your win in Kelly's contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/6/2014 10:35:00 PM
nice win...PD
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Date: 8/4/2014 4:12:00 PM
Grats on your win :) Hugs :) :)
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:43:00 AM
My personal favorite so far, congratulations Nette.
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Date: 8/4/2014 7:53:00 AM
Wow Nette very subtle n lovely! Congrats on huge win !
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Date: 8/3/2014 7:32:00 AM
dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/3/2014 7:30:00 AM
Wow, such a poem, and wonderful win. CONGRATULATIONS, On a poem well done. Pd
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Date: 8/3/2014 4:59:00 AM
you're in the pink with this one, nette! lovely imagery, very descriptive - congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 8/3/2014 4:48:00 AM
a very pink win for the little child, Nette.
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Date: 8/2/2014 11:23:00 PM
Big congrats on your win!!
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Date: 8/2/2014 8:38:00 PM
well, this sure was the CUTEST one of all that I have seen. GREAT pink imagery. Pretty in pink! Congrats.
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Date: 8/2/2014 3:07:00 PM
This is so beautiful Nette! Imagery and appeal to the senses is what touched me most. Great ending line, too. Congratulations on a gold-edged win. // paul
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Date: 8/2/2014 12:41:00 PM
Beautiful pinkness. Congratulations on this lovely win.
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Date: 7/25/2014 3:14:00 PM
Wouldn't it be lovely, no matter the creed, that an Angel would recite your wonderful words for every newborn. Simply adorable poetry 'Princess' <*> James :)
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Date: 7/24/2014 5:36:00 PM
Adorable........I can't help but smile with the joy in every word of this poem! ps...a big big thank you dear Nette, for my placement in your recent contest! So fun trying a new form.....you always find a new way to challenge us as poets! Thank you!
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Date: 7/24/2014 11:48:00 AM
Ahhh!! Delightful lines penned by a gran who definitely loves her granddaugher..You'll have to do "This Little Piggy" with her..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..It was a delight to try a new venu to write my thoughts down..Sara
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:49:00 AM
Somehow you always 'hit the nail on the head' your poetry speaks volumes, you are very special nette...
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:42:00 AM
-So cute in pink ..... real girl baby color - Lovely poem - Home sweet Home :))) - Yes, at home last night ! - Everything is fine, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:38:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful! Oh the sweet smells of a baby, and being able to giggle just because your realize your toes wiggle. Makes me long for the times when mine were tiny.
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