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A newborn’s toes wiggle like candy pink
Curled by rose petals, more fresh than morn’s scent
Flinging those buds, I trace her blossoms.

Pastel from the wink of sunlight’s blossoms
She chuckles as tiny feet gush in pink,
While the hammock billows a fruity scent.

In quick of naps,ten toes waft talcum scent
Till chuckles burst forth from jiggling blossoms,
My grandchild, my rose; graced by daytime's pink.

Lovely pink charmer wakes scent of blossoms!

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  1. Date: 8/6/2014 10:35:00 PM
    nice win...PD

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 5:17:00 PM
    I could feel this one from the first Nette especially because of the way you appealed to the olfactory, the memory's greatest recall! Not only was this magically talented, it was fun and cute and beautiful wrapped in a loving blanket.

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 4:12:00 PM
    Grats on your win :) Hugs :) :)

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 8:43:00 AM
    My personal favorite so far, congratulations Nette.

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 7:53:00 AM
    Wow Nette very subtle n lovely! Congrats on huge win !

  1. Date: 8/3/2014 7:32:00 AM
    dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) Hugs jan xxx

  1. Date: 8/3/2014 7:30:00 AM
    Wow, such a poem, and wonderful win. CONGRATULATIONS, On a poem well done. Pd

  1. Date: 8/3/2014 4:59:00 AM
    you're in the pink with this one, nette! lovely imagery, very descriptive - congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 8/3/2014 4:48:00 AM
    a very pink win for the little child, Nette.

  1. Date: 8/2/2014 11:23:00 PM
    Big congrats on your win!!

  1. Date: 8/2/2014 8:38:00 PM
    well, this sure was the CUTEST one of all that I have seen. GREAT pink imagery. Pretty in pink! Congrats.

  1. Date: 8/2/2014 3:07:00 PM
    This is so beautiful Nette! Imagery and appeal to the senses is what touched me most. Great ending line, too. Congratulations on a gold-edged win. // paul

  1. Date: 8/2/2014 12:41:00 PM
    Beautiful pinkness. Congratulations on this lovely win.

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 1:10:00 AM
    Lovely lovely! What a beautiful dedication to your grandchild, Nettie! Your poems are a true delight.

  1. Date: 7/25/2014 3:14:00 PM
    Wouldn't it be lovely, no matter the creed, that an Angel would recite your wonderful words for every newborn. Simply adorable poetry 'Princess' <*> James :)

  1. Date: 7/24/2014 5:36:00 PM
    Adorable........I can't help but smile with the joy in every word of this poem! ps...a big big thank you dear Nette, for my placement in your recent contest! So fun trying a new always find a new way to challenge us as poets! Thank you!

  1. Date: 7/24/2014 11:48:00 AM
    Ahhh!! Delightful lines penned by a gran who definitely loves her granddaugher..You'll have to do "This Little Piggy" with her..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..It was a delight to try a new venu to write my thoughts down..Sara

  1. Date: 7/24/2014 9:49:00 AM
    Somehow you always 'hit the nail on the head' your poetry speaks volumes, you are very special nette...

  1. Date: 7/24/2014 6:42:00 AM
    -So cute in pink ..... real girl baby color - Lovely poem - Home sweet Home :))) - Yes, at home last night ! - Everything is fine, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/24/2014 6:38:00 AM
    Absolutely beautiful! Oh the sweet smells of a baby, and being able to giggle just because your realize your toes wiggle. Makes me long for the times when mine were tiny.