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Lovely Garden

Lovely Garden In a place of beautiful views, We were sitting down with a smile While watching the glorious sunset Giving us a feeling of bliss! When a real love between us sprouted Those flowers around us; Scented with a real affection Your guise is quite familiar! In a lovely garden of lilies, The sundry banters became colorful. Life then is meaningful; When I heard your golden voice The promise of forever, The only thing I could remember; My heart began to sing joyful melodies, And I hope it won't last Suddenly the environs, Turned serene and lonesome Someone beside me is gone Then, I realized it was but a dream!

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Janis Thompson

Date: 2/19/2020 6:09:00 AM

What a lovely dream written in a lovely poem. Thanks for your comments. Janis

Estela Canama
Date: 2/23/2020 1:01:00 AM

Thank you, Janis for your inspiring words. God bless!

Elaine Perrin

Date: 9/27/2019 2:05:00 PM

Such beautiful words :-) x

Estela Canama
Date: 10/4/2019 12:40:00 AM

Thanks so much, Elaine for reading and for your comment.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/25/2019 4:53:00 PM

Ahh, such a lovely poem this is showing the distinction between the real world and the dream world, who says only depressed people live in a dream world, every poet and even every normal person lives in a world of his/her own, where he is the creator of his own imaginations, however the only problem is that this world doesn't have any future, anyways I really enjoyed the imagery you put in this poem, good luck and have a really nice day

Estela Canama
Date: 6/28/2019 1:10:00 AM

Thanks a lot! You're such a wonderful person. You have a lot of bright ideas. Sometimes, dreams will be a reality. Try to jot down some of your dreams. And someday, you'll realize that some of your dreams did come true.

Charles Messina

Date: 5/9/2019 8:05:00 PM

It may have been a dream, but you made it feel so real...Awesome poetry Estela. Keep writing...your poetry shines. Love & Hugs...Charlie

Estela Canama
Date: 5/11/2019 9:23:00 AM

Thank you very much, Charles for your inspiring words. God bless!

Constance La France

Date: 4/1/2019 8:50:00 AM

Estela, your poem is so beautifully penned, I could feel the emotion and then, the sad twist at the end, well done !

Estela Canama
Date: 4/4/2019 6:39:00 AM

Thank you very much, Dear Heart for your wonderful comment. God bless!