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Lovely As the Dawn

A poem lovely as the dawn With gems of dew upon the lawn From an empty page words will spark As dawn once more defeats the dark Bringing to us a day thats new Lovely skies of tangerine too And birds sweetly sing from the trees To usher in a gentle breeze Words will flow from the poet's pen As light meanders in the glen New possibilties come our way Thank the Lord for a brand new day 3-4-2022 A Poem Lovely As Contest Sponsor: Margarita Lillico

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Date: 10/15/2022 10:21:00 AM
I keep clicking on poems and now I am down here, also a poem I have read and commented to, but one that deserves a second seeing!! Such a lovely poem
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Date: 3/15/2022 2:55:00 PM
Very well-rhymed couplets, Joseph. Another great entry for a contest. Good luck! Bill
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Date: 3/13/2022 2:43:00 PM
That's beautiful. I love " as light meanders in the glen." Congratulations.
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Date: 3/12/2022 1:52:00 PM
An absolute pleasure to read Joseph. Congratulations on your POTD. Cheers Anne :-)
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Date: 3/10/2022 9:05:00 AM
That was one of the very best in the contest. Marvelous and I think I see here that it also got POTD. Congrats, and thanks for my win with Apollo
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Date: 3/9/2022 11:26:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2022 1:05:00 PM
Oh my gosh Joseph, I missed this yesterday, but so glad I see it today <3 This is beautiful!! Congratulations, though a day late, on your wonderful honor of POTD! I can certainly see why it earned this honor, a FAV for me!! God bless you! <3 ~BJ
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Date: 3/6/2022 10:00:00 PM
Beautiful poem, enjoyed! Congrats on POTD, Joseph!
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Date: 3/6/2022 8:24:00 PM
This is beautiful, Joseph:) congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 3/6/2022 7:53:00 PM
Joseph, your words are "lovely as the dawn, and soft like "a gentle breeze." This is so beautiful and uplifting. My heart is smiling. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/6/2022 5:57:00 PM
Congratulations! Joseph, on your POTD win. I enjoyed the rhyme and the message. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/6/2022 3:28:00 PM
Joseph, beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance
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Date: 3/6/2022 2:33:00 PM
How very pretty this is, Joseph! it emits that soft, contemplative energy that seeps in with the dawn. Very nicely done. Molly
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Date: 3/6/2022 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph. This is a beauty. Your imagery is at full sail. Good luck in the contest. Best - Ken
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Date: 3/6/2022 9:38:00 AM
Lovely verse, Joseph, a very well deserved POTD. I feel the same as Milt, it is a very good written poem. Bless you
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Date: 3/6/2022 9:21:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. I'm certainly not surprised because it is a particularly good one!
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Date: 3/6/2022 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the day! It truly is as "Lovely as the Dawn"....the flow and imagery picture perfect! :)Paulette
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Date: 3/6/2022 8:32:00 AM
Lovely poem.... ! Dawn and poets are always linked ! It is in the early hours of the day that words spark from an empty page . Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, dear Joseph !
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Date: 3/6/2022 7:49:00 AM
Hi Joseph Congratulations on getting the poem of the day with such a beautiful and well-written write. Best wishes in the contest as well. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 3/6/2022 7:29:00 AM
Back with congrats on your well deserving POTD honor with this wonderful write Joseph... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 3/6/2022 7:18:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on the POTD honor. Well deserve, fine poetry. Bill
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Date: 3/6/2022 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Lovely As The Dawn" is a "Beautiful" day/write. I can hear your birds singing. Have a great/blessed~~day/week with your win...........................
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Date: 3/6/2022 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful POTD ! I can see the gems of dew sparkling on the lawn. :) A FAVE
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Date: 3/6/2022 5:41:00 AM
As lovely as your beautifully penned words of a new day...sparks a POTD and congratulations!
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Date: 3/6/2022 5:01:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Joseph. Enjoy your day.
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