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Loveliness

Lured by the dulcet song of a lark perched On the low-hanging limb of a blossoming tree, around which Violets had sprung in wild beauty among the verdancy as if Embroidering the lush long meadow grasses, I Lingered, while the ballerina breeze lightly danced flowers’ fragrance to me. Imbued with the luminescence of a New day’s dawn, the nearby lake was sparkling. Elysian my whole world seemed, enveloping me in Splendor, so I stayed, lazing in the sun, listening to the Susurrus wind and the lark’s sweet serenade. Written Feb. 17, 2016

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Date: 2/13/2017 5:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 2/13/2017 10:29:00 AM
This is indeed loveliness! Congrats.
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Date: 2/13/2017 10:27:00 AM
"Lovely" poem on loveliness for a lovely lady poetess :) thank yo and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 3/5/2016 7:33:00 AM
wonderful and lovely piece,Andrea...Congrats on your well deserved win...
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Date: 3/1/2016 7:37:00 PM
how wonderful this is...congrats Andrea
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Date: 2/23/2016 1:17:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations on your win with this acrostic full of imagery! I so enjoyed reading this Andrea. Fantastic!
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Date: 2/23/2016 12:25:00 AM
Yet another superb poem n win Andrea.. big congrats..
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Date: 2/22/2016 5:34:00 PM
Congrats well written xxxx
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Date: 2/22/2016 4:29:00 PM
a 'lovely' loveliness Acrostic, Andrea. Congratulations on your 2nd place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/22/2016 3:42:00 PM
beautiful imagery in your acrostic congrats on your win:-) love the word susurrus I may have to 'borrow' that word if you will let me:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2016 2:44:00 PM
lovely indeed well done on a win
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:26:00 PM
Lovly poem on loveliness Andrea. Congradulations.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:26:00 PM
Lovely poem on loveliness Andrea. Congradulations.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:05:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:27:00 AM
Way to go Andrea!
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:10:00 AM
Wow Andrea I was very impressed with this outstanding write! I usually can spot your writing style but this one fooled me. What a great use of vocabulary!33/34 Congrats on your 2nd place!
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:07:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo
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Date: 2/19/2016 7:35:00 PM
Such a gracefully written Acrostic.
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Date: 2/19/2016 3:16:00 PM
"Lingered, while the ballerina breeze..." Beautiful line in a lovely write.
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Date: 2/18/2016 6:58:00 PM
very lovely.
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:11:00 PM
Beautiful with lovely imagery!
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:38:00 PM
This is really lovely, dear Andrea!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:33:00 AM
you always have such unique images within your poems always bringing them forth for the reader to enjoy...gorgeous Andrea :)
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Date: 2/17/2016 11:08:00 PM
Andrea, this is a beautiful acrostic, well done dear heart ~
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:05:00 PM
You're really good with those long drawn-out sentences! The language was really pretty, especially words like "Elysian" and "susurrus" ... words in which I rarely find in poetry. I think this will do well, Andrea.
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