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Longing to escape my reality, on a bright sunny day, I went for a walk, velvety flowers were waiting for me around every turn in the forest path, and long, I lingered in the lush tangled emerald. In my beautiful and serene tranquility, new beginnings stirred within and I absorbed the, exquisite scenes and sweet bird melodies, so soothing to my soul, and butterflies drifted gracefully silent, in the dappled lovely green . . . ________________________ February 13, 2016 Poetry/Acrostic/Loveliness Copyright Protected, ID 16-756-414-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Loveliness Acrostic, sponsor, John Hamilton Third Place

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Date: 2/23/2016 1:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful walk! Great imagery, a serene feeling came over me while reading. I like it.
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Date: 2/23/2016 1:34:00 AM
Susan, thanks for visiting with congratulations and the beautiful and the nice comment, appreciate !
Date: 2/23/2016 12:27:00 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win broken.
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Date: 2/23/2016 1:35:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the compliment and the congrats !
Date: 2/22/2016 6:48:00 PM
Again, thank you..Linda
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Date: 2/22/2016 5:37:00 PM
Congrats well written xxxx
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Date: 2/22/2016 6:37:00 PM
Wendy, thanks for visiting with the congrats XX
Date: 2/22/2016 4:36:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2016 6:38:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the congrats and hugs XX
Date: 2/22/2016 1:06:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/22/2016 6:39:00 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations ~~
Date: 2/22/2016 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations Constance.
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Date: 2/22/2016 12:01:00 PM
Richard, thanks for visiting with congratulations !
Date: 2/22/2016 9:27:00 AM
Congrats on your 3rd place Constance on a very nicely flowing poem, very nice visuals, very serene, well done!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 12:03:00 PM
John, thanks so much for the great acrostic contest, and thanks for my placement, and the compliments, I am honored. . .
Date: 2/14/2016 5:00:00 PM
L o v e l y, BW.
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Date: 2/15/2016 1:03:00 AM
James, oh that is so sweet, thank you !
Date: 2/14/2016 8:02:00 AM
nature finds its way to make life this lovely.. fine wirte, dear constance and happy hearts day!..huggs
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Date: 2/15/2016 1:05:00 AM
nette, thanks for visiting and for the compliment !
Date: 2/13/2016 5:23:00 PM
nice... LINDA
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Date: 2/13/2016 5:25:00 PM
Linda, thanks so much for visiting, appreciate !
Date: 2/13/2016 4:21:00 PM
such a calming acrostic with such beautiful imagery:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 2/13/2016 4:30:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting and for the beautiful and the hugs and the 7 !

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