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A gift Like a sweet kiss Laid at my feet, upbeat Of the heart, joined souls, sweetest bliss Lives on. A song Like a river Flowing between canyons Grateful for its air of moisture Fragrance. A dance In rapid steps Sometimes in slow motion Of a spirit, receiving new precepts Opens. A love Rose like the dawn In a warm orange glow Filling my life with a new song Awed soul. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 03/29/10

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Date: 4/3/2010 7:47:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 4/3/2010 10:29:00 AM
Lovely Cinquain Caroline, sweet write >> James
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Date: 3/30/2010 3:10:00 PM
Just stopping by to wish you a Happy Easter.
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Date: 3/30/2010 1:04:00 AM
This is very lovely, Caroline. I got the results of the numerology up in a blog too if you want to see it. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 3/29/2010 9:22:00 PM
so much love you have to give.I posted a couple more poems.One is for a rambling poets contest.Mu assignment was friendship. Take a peak if you get a chance.Hop all is well.
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Date: 3/29/2010 8:45:00 PM
very impressive!
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Date: 3/29/2010 4:15:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Caroline .. a lovely piece of poetic genius ..thankxxx for your lovely comments on my poetry also.. and thankxxx for encouragement too..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/29/2010 4:12:00 PM
Great write in this one..Very expressive and descriptive.. Sara
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