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Loveless

Loveless Broken hearted Abused, beaten, bruised Aching, hurting, wanting,needing Lonely

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2015 7:17:00 PM

Miss you!!!! Carol, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Summer Arthur

Date: 11/18/2011 8:03:00 PM

Sad, but definitely true. Everyone at some point in life feels like this and it's not an easy thing to go through. I love how you end it with the word lonely because lonely is the last feeling one feels after a broken heart. <3

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 11/17/2011 12:25:00 PM

Closed doors hide secrets Carol but not for those inside . Thank you for your words they moved me best wishes Declan xx

Judy Ball

Date: 11/9/2011 4:04:00 PM

That pretty well summs it up alright. Well done. Good description. Good emotion. God Bless, JB

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/3/2011 11:41:00 PM

Hey.! a discriptive write here Carol..! but you'd better not feel like this the whole time cos i need happy poetry:) all the better days i wish you Joe

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2011 9:59:00 PM

yes, loveless and lonely do go hand in hand, Carol. Good cinquain!

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/3/2011 9:30:00 PM

Without love living life seems to be like that what your writing depicts. Wonderfully done well. bl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/3/2011 1:51:00 PM

Carol, it's often heard to admit, but there are many lonely people who need love to heal their hearts. Beautiful write, dear! Love, carolyn

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/3/2011 1:48:00 PM

Once somthing is "broken" Carol, i've heard it is impossible to break it again so if it then continues to work though broken..! what they gonna do then..! and i wish you many good poems, yours Joe

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/3/2011 12:28:00 PM

* “Makes Myself Wish to Reach Out & Hold Your Precious Beautiful Heart Unto My Own * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * Yet to Be Honest * I Have Long Felt That Desire * Very Moving, &, Very Beautiful * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Kash Poet

Date: 11/3/2011 11:41:00 AM

Very sad....but amazing poetry from you Carol!Thanks for ever inspiring congrats messages at my pages.

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 11/3/2011 11:12:00 AM

awww...so sad