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People will stay in a relationship or marriage Evan when the know there is a problem Living in hope that things will get better. And when love is one way it is harder to leave And start again
The storm clouds are forming they darkene the Sky's Like the anger inside when you tell me your lies. You give no excuse you just laugh in my face I know you do love me too you I'm a disgrace. Whispering on phone calls secret message you Read. My worlds falling apart you make my heart bleed. If you don't want me please let me know. I will pack up my broken heart and then I will go.

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Date: 11/27/2023 4:18:00 PM
I felt the anguish and pain of a one-way relationship. This line was poignant and grabbed my heart: My worlds falling apart you make my heart bleed. It's hard to pack up with one's broken heart, truly is. Nothing worse than that level of heartache born of mistrust and abandonment. have a splendid evening, Sara
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