Loved Ones

Chased by the fleeing clouds defined by the wind life running too short, make peace with loved ones. Tell them you love them, hug them and be moved. Tomorrow might be none, for later tears and broken heart, it'll hurt when they're beneath the earth. 12/16/2021 Happy Holidays to all my Soup Family

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/18/2021 9:45:00 AM

What a lovely message dear Eve... and SO true... Am faving this... Wishing you and yours a merry Christmas... Hugs... ~ Ani

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/18/2021 6:31:00 AM

A loving message. thanks Panagiota

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/18/2021 5:49:00 AM

Great message, Eve, wish you and your family a merry Christmas:)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/17/2021 9:31:00 PM

Ah, how true this is, Eve. It is so much better when families can live together in peace, if not always in harmony. None of us are guaranteed tomorrow, so we need to take care of this important business today, while it is on our mind. Merry Christmas, Eve, to you and yours.

Eve Roper
Date: 12/18/2021 11:45:00 AM

Thank you, Milt, I've learned by experience. Merry Christmas dear friend

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/17/2021 8:03:00 PM

How true Merry Christmad Pangie

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/17/2021 10:58:00 AM

Dear Eve, May you have a blessed Christmas with your family and hope whatever you wish for comes true. Love Jennifer.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/17/2021 4:39:00 AM

Eve! You’ve here taken a worn message and resurrected it, to a revived life. My eyes welled with tears as the poem itself flowed forth with ac felt divine inspiration. A Fav for me. Bless you. Thank you. Even I felt loved reading this. Hugs, sally