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Loved Child

they say love child an`t nothing but a word but if you didn't know its really a child that parents didn't want them they have a lot of loved child in the world i guess we need to try to help them and tell them y this tragic thing are this good thing happend to them well me myself i call myself a loved child i don`t really know why i guess its the way i feel about my dad when you hear of someone that suppose to be there they leave you when you were young when you were not able to understand y no phone calls dolt even let you meet them they just go and be with there other kids and leave that special kid that they didn't want all alone with there mom to be a single mom to raise to care for me

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2010 4:16:00 PM

Yes, this was a very personal and deep poem, as Solomon said below. My dad left too, but he was mentally ill, and at least I got to see him time to time. Nothing can replace the feeling of abandonment. It will always be there and I can only imagine your pain. Thanks for sharing. Andrea

Solomon Storm

Date: 1/12/2010 1:50:00 PM

a very deep subject, i myself am adopted, raised by virtual strangers. i was a loved child, but not LOVED i am glad that your life seems to have worked out well. i love my children, but am not with them i only hope and pray that they never forget, or are lied to, so to think that i don't, or didn't love them. a very deep and personally meaningful poem i'd say thanx, but i'm not sure i can. i've love for you, too. fellow gentlepoet.