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Loved

One boy and one girl they loved each other and it wasn't fair That all they could do was stare They couldn't be together and they knew But at the same time they didn't have a clue He loved her and she loved him And when they weren't together it tore them limb from limb Sometimes they would cry And only they would no the reason why That's why you cherish what you have and don't complain Because you never know when it wont be the same

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2016 5:15:00 PM

Beautifully penned Adarah - we can't help who we fall in love with but circumstances especially with families can sometimes keep people apart:-( hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet

Date: 8/5/2016 9:59:00 PM

Nice poem, Adarah.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/2/2016 7:39:00 AM

Hi Adarah. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2016 4:31:00 PM

Back to read this one R eally good. lOve it.... LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2016 9:59:00 AM

Adarah,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Adarah Witherspoon
Date: 7/23/2016 12:40:00 PM

Thanks i really didnt expect for someone to be so nice so quickly i have read some of your poems and i do like them thanks again

Skat A

Date: 7/22/2016 4:09:00 PM

Adarah, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Adarah Witherspoon
Date: 7/23/2016 12:42:00 PM

Hi thanks for being nice to me and i cant wait to learn about you to