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Love Your Offspring

love your offspring, for soon, off they will spring like frogs gainst morning dew

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/15/2013 11:01:00 PM

I love wordplay! But not only is it clever, you've used it convey a really good message... Frogs are slippery, you can't hold onto them forever! I like your style Laura... Keep it up!

... Gigno

Date: 2/13/2013 5:52:00 PM

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2013 9:42:00 PM

weee..the offspring.. A good verse Laura, i got the image hopping towards the dew... xox~LINDA

The Situation

Date: 2/11/2013 1:13:00 PM

13, signals 16, acceptance 18, gone

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2013 11:27:00 PM

how CUTE. And it's not so bad when they hop away. just so they hop back now and then!!

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/10/2013 3:11:00 PM

I think this sentiment not only applies to children, but also our creative products as well - J.A.B. %