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Your voice is spoken, Soft and gentle, But the words you say, Drive me mental. Mental with love, It drives me crazy, Your words so beautiful, Like a daisy. You said to me once, That you would run away, But only if, I found you again, These words so great, My cheeks blush pink, Then you walk away, And leave me to think, I am sure that I know, That love is so true, But only when were close, When I am with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/24/2009 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Vicki.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:58:00 PM
Vicki a very beautiful love poem - congratulations on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/3/2009 12:58:00 PM
Love is a beautiful thing, as is this poem.....GREAT write..........:JP]
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Date: 8/3/2009 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 4/14/2009 3:14:00 PM
Nice work Vicki and welcome to poetry soup.
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:46:00 PM
Beautiful.
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