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Love Wonder

When you were born the Sun named you Wondra and Luna fed you star fire from her naked night, they knew you would dance with feet of love war that your heart would become poetry, body an angel's repository and that your soul would cry diamonds, a mind of misfit symphony, As you've grown, so pretty and strong like a song of valor from an incorruptible heartbeat a new passion of virtue has glown from your triumphant love touch, serpents have negotiated for your beauty only to be awed by your command and the indigenous creatures of Earth have come to your maternal hand for guidance, the crosses in your eyes have shown the brave sanctuary and the wicked outstretched humility - J.A.B.

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/2/2015 1:51:00 PM

A being who possesses a poetic heart, an angelic nature, humility, and who can also be fearless is extraordinary, and worthy of the love you give her... Once again, your wonderful poetry leaves me in awe, Justin!

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/3/2015 3:16:00 AM

We are worthy of undying love from which out hearts, warrior spirit sculpts Kelly. Thank you so much for caring about this passion...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/26/2015 2:24:00 PM

Beautiful in every way, Justin. You have been clearly inspired to write this tribute. I've missed your poetry...It always has that Larger Than Life quality to it.

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/27/2015 1:51:00 AM

To write without inspiration is write with a missing heart...we must believe in our love to know the poetry of our soul my Beloved Poetess. Your presence is so encouraging for me, you put my quill in motion...J.A.B.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/5/2015 4:04:00 PM

You do capture something very special. You have a very keen understanding of the beautiful things in life and your words shine like the jewels at the center of the exhibit at the Natural History Museum. Wonderful.

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/6/2015 2:28:00 AM

Yes Duke, the natural history of our love is on display for the world, gleaming with clear brilliance, a priceless, uncuttable jewel of resplendent spirit...J.A.B.

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2015 7:08:00 AM

Justin, beautifully penned, love the layout pattern, a 7 and I want to thank you so much for the wonderful contests you sponsor and for my honor in your contest, The Crosses in you eyes, so appreciated

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/29/2015 8:29:00 PM

You are a beautiful woman who does not surrender to stress or false criticism, and I am inspired by your pure devotion for expressing the awesome poetry that is you my Wings of Fire...I'm so happy that you like my craftsmanship...I love sharing inspiration with hearts like yours...J.A.B.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/28/2015 5:48:00 AM

Powerful well expressed, Justin your description in this is write swims smoothly in the heart of the readers, each time you picked up your pen and write on this subject of yours, you always put me in wonder. You have a magical pen...........A.M.

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/28/2015 6:46:00 PM

There is a magic current between our hearts, I love her uncontrollably...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/23/2015 11:10:00 PM

Justin, the serpents negotiating....... mmmmmn I would be scared and cautious! this a powerful great example for your contest.. always, vivid imagery and intense descriptions making your poem come to life!~Olive Eloisa =")

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/24/2015 8:57:00 PM

Thank you Olive, for allowing my poetry to live in you, deeply and vividly...her Nature attracts all...J.A.B.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/23/2015 1:24:00 AM

I noticed that the poems you post are not back to back.Is it because when you do its going to leave the reader saying wow? Your gift is incredible.Thanks for sharing:-)Alexis

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/23/2015 8:17:00 PM

Your beauty is incredible Alexis...you have made my heart happy...J.A.B.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/22/2015 4:39:00 PM

So glad to see your pen again, I'm speechless, it is as always. Excellent............A.M.

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/23/2015 12:35:00 AM

When the soul trusts it's purpose excellence is sure to result my friend. Thank you very much Afolabi, your encouragement is so nice...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/21/2015 3:50:00 AM

I am running out of creative things to say about your work... again, I am in awe!!! I love that last line... this newness, this growth, is something to celebrate! Your themes are always inspiring, challenging, and crystal clear. The kind of clear that makes you question clarity. Humility has never been so wickedly fascinating! "a mind of misfit symphony" Is a force to be reckoned with. Much like you, sweet poet of genius!! Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/21/2015 8:52:00 PM

You are a woman that needs to feel every possibility of love, to see new meaning in tradition, needing to answer life with exquisite sensitivity and creativity Laura...to feel your heart, intense and clear is all that I need...J.A.B.

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/20/2015 6:13:00 AM

I've wondered about your take on this theme, Justin. I have somehow anticipated this but not how abruptly it ended in that last line. This reader is left to wonder some more then, and would have been happier with a few more lines. But such is your inspiration, and would have to respect it. But thank you for sharing this, and for providing another inspiration. Kim

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/20/2015 8:24:00 PM

My creative process for this composition did not take into consideration whether or not you would be happy, perplexed, or illuminated by this beautiful artwork Kim...I am pleased that I am able to defy your anticipation and thus spur your fertile mind into variant excitments and mysteries lovely Poetess...you share your thoughts like a trustworthy friend, and I appreciate that very much...J.A.B.