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Love Without Hope

Years have drifted by as I live by your memories to garner Silently I quivered for your love, but shied to whisper You lived in tumultuous ignorance of my passions dearer The heedless winds blissfully enveloped you, leaving me lonelier March 28, 2016 Contest: Love Without Hope Sponsor : Sara Kendrick

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 11:34:00 PM

Balveen, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA

Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/7/2016 4:42:00 AM

Thanks Linda!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/2/2016 12:37:00 AM

Congrats on great win with this lovely write Balveen..

Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/2/2016 3:07:00 AM

Thanks Upma!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2016 6:03:00 PM

beautiful quatrain congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/2/2016 3:08:00 AM

So glad you found it beautiful & many thanks, Jan!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2016 8:35:00 AM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara I liked the rhythm and flow of this one..

Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/1/2016 10:05:00 AM

Thanks Sara! The pleasure of working with you is entirely mine! Balveen

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/1/2016 8:25:00 AM

A beautiful Quatrain, Balveen. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/1/2016 10:05:00 AM

Thanks Sandra!

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/1/2016 7:49:00 AM

This is so brilliant Balveen! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS

Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/1/2016 10:06:00 AM

That's so kind of you! Thanks Hansteven!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/28/2016 9:06:00 PM

Eloquent, Balveen. "Silently I quivered for your love, but shield to whisper" ... such great language that breezily puts me into your thoughts. Beautiful quatrain and I hope it does well.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/29/2016 4:54:00 AM

Thanks Timothy for your appreciation!