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Love Without Hope

In the cosmic consciousness thru the pillars of esoteric endless time The Angelic realm is worried that mans love will soon cease to rhyme What is love without hope but a void in the vastness of our malignant mind The Angels silently scurry to find a cure thru the vortex of Nebulous Prime. March.24.2016 For Contest-"Love Without Hope" By Sara Kendrick

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/26/2016 1:52:00 PM

Great lines, wonderful flows, indicative of a soul deep mind. An excellent seven well deserved.

Winged Warrior
Date: 5/26/2016 1:55:00 PM

Thank you Funom my friend...always nice to hear from you...god bless...WW

Lin Lane

Date: 4/7/2016 9:01:00 AM

Forgive my not commenting sooner. I've been out of town and leaving again today for another trip. I just wanted to tell you the scope of this rhyme is an infinite as the range of the "Nebulous" universe. ;)

Winged Warrior
Date: 4/7/2016 10:31:00 AM

No forgiveness necessary my dear Lady Lin...and thank you for your cosmically kind words...off to worldly ventures I see...good day and good luck...god bless...^WW^

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 11:31:00 PM

Winged, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA

Winged Warrior
Date: 4/7/2016 12:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Linda...god bless...^WW^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/2/2016 12:31:00 AM

Congrats on great win with this lovely write Warrior..

Winged Warrior
Date: 4/2/2016 9:07:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma...hope everything is O.K...god bless...^WW^

Eve Roper

Date: 4/1/2016 5:52:00 PM

Great write, WW!!!!! Congratulations on your win !!

Winged Warrior
Date: 4/1/2016 5:59:00 PM

Thank you Eve...one day we shall all visit Nebulous Prime lol...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2016 5:42:00 PM

I thought of star trek when I read your rhyme ^WW^ congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior
Date: 4/1/2016 6:01:00 PM

No # 1...Engage!!!...

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2016 5:58:00 PM

I really loved the original star trek and also next generation:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior
Date: 4/1/2016 5:57:00 PM

Thank you dear Jan...you're quite right...used to be a big fan...not so much now...but that show taught us a lot...god bless...^WW^

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2016 8:10:00 AM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Winged Warrior
Date: 4/1/2016 8:42:00 AM

Thank you my dear Sara...for you kind comment...I agree...I've should have at least placed between 1'st and 2'nd place lol...god bless...^WW^

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/1/2016 7:48:00 AM

This is so brilliant Winged Warrior! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS

Winged Warrior
Date: 4/1/2016 8:35:00 AM

Thank you my friend Hansteven...and there will be more...first I must go to Nebulous Prime lol...god bless...^WW^

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/28/2016 1:39:00 AM

Wow, WW, excellent four lines! Very celestial and thought-provoking especially the second and third lines. Hope this does well in the contest!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/28/2016 7:00:00 AM

Thank my dear friend Timothy...I used to watch a lot of Star Trek..."Engage..."...god bless...^WW^

Cortney Bartholomew

Date: 3/26/2016 12:01:00 PM

Love this,,,,your writing is absolutely beautiful!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/26/2016 1:17:00 PM

Thank you dear Cortney...as are you and the Angels...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2016 6:16:00 PM

I really loved the sound and idea of that third line, it's so true. Sure to do well in Sara's contest.

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/24/2016 7:52:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend...god bless and Happy Easter...^WW^

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 3/24/2016 12:47:00 PM

"love without hope".....a scary void! The best in this contest ^WW^....a cosmically felt write!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/24/2016 5:19:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend Walter...thank god we have hope...god bless...^WW^

Constance La France

Date: 3/24/2016 12:40:00 PM

Winged, nicely done for the contest, I want to try this contest also, I am loving this 7 ~

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/24/2016 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Wings...can't wait to read it...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/24/2016 10:09:00 AM

"Love soon cease to rhyme", love that. Well wishes, Charlie

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/24/2016 10:29:00 AM

Thank you dear friend...god bless...^WW^