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Love Will Triumph

Songlike, melodious was her voice Awestruck was he with her gentle beauty In her love alone he could rejoice Forgetting about his gentleman's duty Dramatic was the scene when her father Swiftly appeared, vivid his displeasure Brave young man who held it altogether His strength of character one could treasure Mother lovely gentle emissary But father stands huge, angry protective Will mom's love restrain the adversary Will her people skills be most effective Love will triumph, youth will win his gold prize Father will give to him his daughter as bride Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Contest: Charles Haigh Wood Written: August 31, 2013

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Date: 10/5/2013 8:55:00 PM
Melodious words as well! It was a pleasure to read this poem of yours.
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Date: 10/2/2013 2:05:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/1/2013 6:54:00 PM
Sara this is a beautiful write, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/1/2013 5:10:00 PM
wow, great poem in this contest. I had not seen it yet. congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/31/2013 1:23:00 PM
IT FIRST THE PAINTING SO WELL, SARA! Great job! :) That is what I understood from the painting, except I thought the mother needed to look older.... :)
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:34:00 AM
Very lovely words woven together sara....I enjoyed this poem ty4sharing <3 cherie
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:01:00 AM
a LOVELY write Sara, good luck in the contest... xox..Linda
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