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Love Vs Hate

Love is filled with beauty and gleed, with light and a song, everyone there is free to be happy because everyone should feel that they belong, but love is not always a lovers kiss, but could be the sun that at night is always missed, love could be the summer breeze, love could be the buzzing bees, but hate is something different, hate is filled with inky black tears that drown out loves songs, hate is filled with burning anger fire burning strong, filled w ith the coldest sadness and rivers that were cried, filled with depression caused by cruel actions of those with an evil mind, hate seems to consume all love but it wont it cant it never will, not with lives forever skill, no because love is too divine, and will dry all the tears he made you cry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/12/2016 7:48:00 AM
Nyasia, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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