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Love Untethered

Adeleke Adeite asks for amour, Portions of love in a plentiful pour. Sharing sweet sighs And Heavenly highs, Fabulous fantasies forevermore. "Unspeakable Love Contest

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Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2011 6:24:00 AM

Just so lovely, I am sure Adeleke will adore this one, dear heart~~

George Aul

Date: 2/17/2011 3:19:00 PM

A very nice write for the contest...Thanks........ George

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/17/2011 1:37:00 PM

Great one..The Alliteration is great..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck..Thanks for the visit to my blog...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2011 4:00:00 PM

thanks for the quick congrats. I just barely learned that contest was judged! I think THIS one is gonna rate high. Your entry is so pretty. My limerick is not lovely at all!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/16/2011 5:15:00 AM

a double treat, joyce.. you come up with very incredible pieces.... love it! best of luck in the contest though i don't think you need it! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2011 10:15:00 PM

ps. yes, oldest crime was for the non rhyming contest. Most of my non rhymes are either prose, etheree or haiku!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2011 6:10:00 PM

Hey you combined alliteration AND limerick. I will have to reread the rules. I thought he said one or the other, but this double Licious THIS way, Joyce!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/15/2011 4:46:00 PM

How ingenious! Combining a limerick with an alliteration. Adeleke should like this one.