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Love Unfulfilled

Your eyes beneath the arches of dark brows were ebony with splashes cinnamon. One penetrating gaze from you would rouse a craving that became too strong to shun. Love unfulfilled, into my dreams you crept, and your voice, edged with velvet, called to me. From the fortress tower where I was kept I’d watch you drawing near. . . my fantasy! The pathway that you took to me in dreams was not so filled with thorns as was our fate. For I would not surrender to your schemes (though next to you my heart would palpitate!) You left; I knew you would, and tears like rain I’ve spilled. . . as in my tower I remain. For Dr. Ram Mehta's Contest: The English or Shakepearian Sonnet (Theme: only unfulfilled love can be romantic)

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Date: 8/12/2020 1:03:00 PM
That darn unfulfilled love! This is right out of a fairy tale book, minus the part where the prince and princess live happily ever after... great sonnet.
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:20:00 AM
Passionate write!Here again I find that GUY!--KASH
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Date: 8/14/2010 6:21:00 PM
unrequited love is one of my favorite themes and what better delivery than a beautiful sonnet! Lovely and well done! hugs, kris
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Date: 8/3/2010 12:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. I always love your sonnets.
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Date: 8/2/2010 9:58:00 PM
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!! Love expressed beautifully!!!!!!!! A perfect win!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!
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Date: 8/2/2010 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win Andrea in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "The English or Shakespearean Sonnet". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2010 11:56:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Andrea. Congratulations on your wll deserved win. Lainie
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Date: 8/1/2010 8:42:00 AM
So many sonnets of yours are excellent....how did you ever choose just one? Another lovely win, Andrea...Congratulations!! love, Carrie
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Date: 7/31/2010 9:17:00 PM
this is great congrats c:
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Date: 7/31/2010 8:39:00 PM
it is romantic, because like clever shakespeare would say, you can never get enough of that "very perfect love" you may find. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/31/2010 2:48:00 PM
Very compelling. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/31/2010 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, with this fine one. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2010 10:02:00 AM
Flows very beautifully Andrea, very nice~Congrats to you!!!!!~God bless Rick
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Date: 7/31/2010 7:04:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your winning fifth place in Dr. Ram's contest as the Queen of the Sonnet strikes again with a magnificent offering... for our viewing pleasure.. enjoy another big win my friend.. with luv.
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Date: 7/31/2010 5:52:00 AM
From the fortress tower where I was kept.. quite Elizabethan age write. I am much impressed the way you have approached the theme of the poem. Congrats on the 5th placement, Andrea.
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Date: 7/24/2010 10:38:00 AM
A sure fire winner! I used to live in an ivory tower, but now I find the climb much too difficult. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/23/2010 12:43:00 PM
Heartwrenching, romantic, and love so unfullfilled ~ I think it is just lovely ~
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Date: 7/23/2010 10:36:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Good stuff , I like the last line in my tower i remain. Feels like today , tomorrow and yesterday. Please if i may ask , will you read my poem Ladies in answer to your Question Cheers
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Date: 7/23/2010 1:41:00 AM
A wonderful sonnet Andrea. I love your choice of rhyming words - brows/rouse, cinnamon/shun, fate/palpitate. Your first couplet really drew me in, and then you did indeed create 'a craving to strong to shun' - a craving to read the rest of such a beautiful write. Soupmail to follow. A super sonnet ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/23/2010 1:28:00 AM
I sure do love your sonnets! This sure is heartbreaking Andrea--loved how you described those eyes with splashes of cinnamon! For some reason I am reminded of Rapunzel (hmm probably because of the tower which reminds me-- I have a write about that I haven't finished...) oops-- incredible story of love unfulfilled here-- should do well yet again!! -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/22/2010 11:54:00 AM
Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2010 7:17:00 AM
A beautiful Sonnet that flows so nicely. Good luck in the contest, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 7/22/2010 12:20:00 AM
Yes unfulfilled love can be heartbreaking,yet romantic,so beautiful dear,one tmfvs,C.C.
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Date: 7/21/2010 10:55:00 PM
this is abslutely beautiful Andrea, should do great in the contest
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Date: 7/21/2010 10:10:00 PM
this is great andrea i love the sonnet form, makes me feel I'm in those times when it was made
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