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Love Torn

love torn thistles prick heartache's sting entices me tangled in soft blooms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/29/2012 11:17:00 AM
Love this one a lot Rhonda....Very touching I hope your day is filled with many smiles...Jon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/29/2012 11:39:00 AM
Thank you so much! I'm getting many smiles while reading poetry today. I hope your day is a happy one, too!
Date: 1/26/2012 11:40:00 AM
Did you mean Heartache?
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/26/2012 12:32:00 PM
Yes, you're right. Better. Thanks!!!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/26/2012 12:29:00 PM
No. Do you think it fits better? I'm going to try it. Thanks, Rhonda

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