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Love Time Out

Bad love, break the heart in a time out One lover’s brain got the best of the doubt And confusion to the other when he heard about It rained, it poured, and it hurt like hell Since the address changed, forget the mail That was sent too early to say farewell His portion of the heart, he could never sell But she thought she could if she hammers the nail He never regrets the time that he proudly fell In love with his best, that can rang his bell The heart don’t lie but it can grow a tale When it walked through the veins, it left a trail She cut his arteries, but his heart prevail Friends over lovers was the way to go Is what she said to him, in the term of a foe Confusion hurt the reason in which he needed to know But who knew in time out, love can still grow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/18/2011 10:15:00 AM
a very moving and touching piece.
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:14:00 PM
Great flow and expressiveness..Enjoyed reading this one in early eve..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:08:00 PM
Sad and moving write, Darian
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